-Your essay is very clear about what you believe in. From the beginning you are clear that your belief is in being thrifty. You give many good examples and show where you came from to get to that place. I think your thesis would be, "I believe in being thrifty."
-For your picture visuals you use Prezii. You also included a picture on your This I Believe tab of the singer. I don't know if you gave the source for that picture. There was no works cited in the project, but that was because all but one of your visuals are pictures you took yourself, except the one on the main page.
-Aesthetics: The project is visually appealing. I like the layout of your page and how you include buttons to link to other pages/visuals.
-Mechanics: I did not see any grammar or punctuation mistakes. You go gurrrrrl.
-Content: Your sound cloud looks beautiful. Like I said before, I like how your layout of your buttons are. I would change the arrangement of your actual essay. Right now it is like all one paragraph. I would break that up for the readers and maybe make some choice words bigger to grab the attention.
-Organization: I'd like to see how the Prezii with your pictures is going to flow with your essay. Do you know when you are going to switch to the next slide yet? I know I'm not sure.
-Originality: I think your essay is very original. I don't think many people would think to write about this, but you did and you made it very fresh.
-Unifying Elements: I think your theme works and flows together good. I might change the layout of your this I believe page so that it's not the paints because that might confuse some people, but I still think it looks cool.
-For your picture visuals you use Prezii. You also included a picture on your This I Believe tab of the singer. I don't know if you gave the source for that picture. There was no works cited in the project, but that was because all but one of your visuals are pictures you took yourself, except the one on the main page.
-Aesthetics: The project is visually appealing. I like the layout of your page and how you include buttons to link to other pages/visuals.
-Mechanics: I did not see any grammar or punctuation mistakes. You go gurrrrrl.
-Content: Your sound cloud looks beautiful. Like I said before, I like how your layout of your buttons are. I would change the arrangement of your actual essay. Right now it is like all one paragraph. I would break that up for the readers and maybe make some choice words bigger to grab the attention.
-Organization: I'd like to see how the Prezii with your pictures is going to flow with your essay. Do you know when you are going to switch to the next slide yet? I know I'm not sure.
-Originality: I think your essay is very original. I don't think many people would think to write about this, but you did and you made it very fresh.
-Unifying Elements: I think your theme works and flows together good. I might change the layout of your this I believe page so that it's not the paints because that might confuse some people, but I still think it looks cool.